"Husband at Home" Revised: New Title: "THE
NEW VERSION AUGUST 14TH 2006It suits him, spotless lab coat,weary Talbot ties closeted away.He putters in worn Reeboks, hums"Cara Nome" along with his ipod,prunes double-ruffled fuchsias,tends...
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You know...I'm not sure that there is anything I can add to this...it's a sharp image, that tells the story very clearly, and with a warmth and affection...The only thing I might suggest is a couple...
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Dear Soulsease,Thanks for the read and your (as always,) fine comments. I'd wondered if the ending strophe was too abrupt, but apparently you didn't think so.Best,Sandy
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No, I don't think it is too abrupt; I like that - it adds to the image of the retired professional still striving to keep a sense of order in even the smallest things, and drives the point home well....
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